Show off your org music...

Discussion in 'Music' started by KuroKun, May 26, 2008.

  1. Dec 31, 2016
    Takeshi64
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    Haven't posted anything here in a long while, but I finally got around to making something new in ORG.

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/bumwlesxnsunz50/Evitcepsrep 3.org?dl=0

    @SuperJaws100 I like the idea for the Festive Mix but a lot of it sounds really off key. Sadly I don't think the songs go well together. Holly Jolly Christmas and Flame of the Fire Lotus sound nice. Fire Lotus sounds nice at some parts of the beginning but strangely dissonant in others. I like the idea you use at the end the most, but maybe mix it up some more because it gets a little repetitive.
     
  2. Jan 7, 2017
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    Here's an ORG I didn't expect to sound good at all.
    But it did.
    And it's awesome.
     
  3. Jan 7, 2017
    Tinned_Duck
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    Here is another little piece I made,
    Imagine a huge ocean in a gigantic high roofed cavern, and you're traversing the cliff-side.
    That is this, Dark Seas
    :)
     
  4. Jan 8, 2017
    SuperJaws100
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    I made a remix of Pulse for the CS: Revival remix project. It's called A Cold Wind and includes motifs from Wind Fortress and the Outer Wall.

    I'd like some advice on transitioning between the motifs and how I can make the overall quality of the track better.
     
  5. Jan 10, 2017
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    I like the use you make out of Tom 1, well done there, kinda short but hey what can I expect from a Mario 64 song (Is it Mario 64? Correct me if I'm wrong). Simplistic but well done.

    Here's a song I made a few months back, got some criticisms, and worked on it a little more I hope they make all the difference, I'm sure @SuperJaws100 and @Random-storykeeper remember this, if not, have I improved on it more? And what would still need to be fixed to make it a better song?

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/etlnwqa92pjlrz7/Aquatic rush 3.13.org?dl=0
     
  7. Jan 20, 2017
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    I transcribed Earthbound Zero/Beginning's shop theme.
     
  8. Feb 19, 2017
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    Well I transcribed that song from B.A.G.U.E.T.T.E.'s soundtrack by Arseniy Shkljaev (don't worry, neither do I know how to pronounce his last name it correctly).

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    Tell me what you think!

    Oh yeah, I forgot to make speaker panning, so you don't have to tell me about that.
     
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  9. Mar 6, 2017
    Glag
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    So, <<here>>'s three five pieces I have made. I took a music theory class and thus have boned up on the stuff you think about in music, but w/e

    in order, there's
    Autumn in Three
    this one is my favorite. It's purposefully laboriously slow and captures the spirit of death and rebirth.

    Bat Ballet
    This one is simple and I will probably add onto/completely reorganize the melodic structure. It's a ballet for bats.

    Be Still
    Choral and stuff, but not done in the slightest. Still have to work out harmonies in the voices etc.

    Cleaver Scalpel Straight Razor
    I basically condensed hatred into music. This one doesn't run according to music theory very well.

    Kissing Vines
    this one's just fun- letkajenkka/letkiss
     
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  10. Mar 7, 2017
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    music is my sanctuary... and org. composition is the best
     
  11. Mar 17, 2017
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    I like it! Good drum tracks and good instrument selection. I would say that the instrument selection for track 3 sounds a bit off though, it just doesn't quite stand out as much as it does in the original. Other than that, this is a good transcription.
     
  14. Mar 22, 2017
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    I'm not that good in terms of my relative pitch, but from what I've heard this seems to be on point. Of course, as I said earlier, my pitch ain't all that, so I could be wrong. That said, the tempo is much too slow. I'd say it's in the 150-160 range. The drums at the beginning don't sound too hard to transcribe, but that's easy for me to say; I'm a drummer myself! The drums seem to be playing a shuffle with an open hi-hat emphasis on the backbeat Speaking of shuffle, try changing the grid display to 4 beat 6 step. the Original song has a definite shuffle/swing feel and I think putting things in sextuplet time could really help. When you do start the drums on your track, they become a bit too slow and off-beat. Just try placing kick on 1 and 3 and closed hi-hat on 2 and 4, the backbeat. After the intro the beat becomes pretty simple.

    Also, here's an .ORG transcription of my favorite Sonic 1 song. I feel as if the instruments I chose could use some work, but I'm just gonna publish this now for some feedback.
     
  16. Mar 23, 2017
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    There are some minor issues, but overall it is a nice transcription! Mostly accurate note placement, and the choice of instrument of the bass is fitting. The biggest problem for me would be track 6, as it is an octave too high, which kinda hurts my ears. I would lower the whole track by one octave. Also, I think the bass track is one octave lower in the original, but it sounds fine where it is now so that's more a matter of preference. There are some minor things too, like the choice of instrument as you mentioned. I think the square-sounding waves for tracks 3 and 6 work well enough, and I mentioned before the bass is good, but you might wanna try experimenting with the others. Also, I think the song (specifically track 6) would benefit from the volume decay commands. I applied the "decay slow" command to the whole track just to see what it sounded like, and it seemed to sound more like the original than without volume decay, so you might want to examine the original song a bit and determine when the volume drops off for each note.
    But those are mostly just minor nitpicks, so good job on the song! I do love Spring Yard myself.
     
  17. Apr 5, 2017
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    well my friend, i hope you continue to have this problem cuz this is very good
    excellent rendition, i don't have much of anything to complain about. very nice instrument selection and it sounds mostly accurate. keep up the good work man.

    so since we're on a sonic kick here, might as well post my cover of Splash Hill 3 that i made a few months ago. i really like this song, and i think orgmaker's synth-y sounding waves did the original song justice.
     
  19. Apr 5, 2017
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    A very good remix indeed. Another user posted a rendition of this song a long time ago, and it wasn't nearly as good as this. This one definitely does the original song justice.

    I'm not familiar with the original song of this, but I certainly to like the sound of this. This was probably a tricky one, because having as many tracks as that work together at the same starting at bar 4 like that can be tricky, but you seemed to handle it quite nicely.
     
  20. Apr 24, 2017
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    OK so >>here<< are my tunes. Some of them I have already posted here at one point or another, although most of those are heavily revised.
    I'd appreciate feedback I guess, although some aren't actually done
    Hematophagy and Bat Ballet are two sides of the same coin, and I'm not sure which I like better
    kissing vines is letkajenkka
    rust glow is hardly anywhere near being even slightly done good lord
    i've posted night sky's gift and regiphobia before but they're way better now
    autumn in three is still my favorite
     
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