Fecal Matter Story, it's returning...

CANCELLED, due to so much hate I stopped developing the mod.
Yes, I am making a better and longer version of "Poop Story". I would not like the name to be Poop Story, because it just sounds so cringe worthy. Okay but about the game so far... It has over 4 endings planned, has custom tilesets, sprites and backrounds, has less bugs and has a actual story.

Btw this is probably my first mod, so lower your expectations
There are no downloads yet, but it is halfway done!
Plz no hate comments it makes people sad

Here are some images:

 

bruh moment

 

Uh, might wanna fix some (all) of that. The NPCs look glitchy as hell, and the maps look really unclean. Honestly, this doesn't look good at all. This seems like your first mod (judging by quality and that you only have 16 posts here), so I don't think you should make it so, uhh, weird. Also, 4 endings is a lot for a first mod. Look, I'm not saying you shouldn't make this mod (yes I am), I'm just saying that you will always be remembered for this mod, and even if you make a remotely good mod, you'll still be remember as the guy who made "shit story".

This looks like a pretty good critique! Better see it as a hate comment!

 

Uh, might wanna fix some (all) of that. The NPCs look glitchy as hell, and the maps look really unclean. Honestly, this doesn't look good at all. This seems like your first mod (judging by quality and that you only have 16 posts here), so I don't think you should make it so, uhh, weird. Also, 4 endings is a lot for a first mod. Look, I'm not saying you shouldn't make this mod (yes I am), I'm just saying that you will always be remembered for this mod, and even if you make a remotely good mod, you'll still be remember as the guy who made "shit story".

Its supposed to look like that, in the story something goes wrong in the island and messes up all the maps.

 

...is the new title somehow not cringeworthy?

 

...is the new title somehow not cringeworthy?

idk

 

Why this.

 

screw rave story 3







this is the mod we deserve.

 

Its supposed to look like that, in the story something goes wrong in the island and messes up all the maps.

Something messing up the maps can be done right, for example, the Egg Corridor after the explosion. But, this is literally putting random tiles in random places for no reason. It looks horrible to be honest, and I know you could probably do better. Also, why name it "fecal matter story"? That's the worst name I've ever heard. And the NPCs, no matter WHAT kind of thing messed them up, should NEVER look like that.

 

Something messing up the maps can be done right, for example, the Egg Corridor after the explosion. But, this is literally putting random tiles in random places for no reason. It looks horrible to be honest, and I know you could probably do better. Also, why name it "fecal matter story"? That's the worst name I've ever heard. And the NPCs, no matter WHAT kind of thing messed them up, should NEVER look like that.

THATS THE POINT! Its supposed to look bad.

 

THATS THE POINT! Its supposed to look bad.

but why

 

Why? Why would you ever make a mod that's supposed to look bad!? That's the worst idea I've ever heard. At least I TRIED in my joke mods. Look, no one on these forums will think a crappy (no pun intended) mod is funny. What'll happen is everyone will dislike you and never play any of your mods.

Hey, if you dont like it then dont be on this thread! Plus the mod isn't even done I might change all this.

 

Just giving some critisism. I'm trying to help you not look like a complete idiot.

Well thanks for the info

 

Why? Why would you ever make a mod that's supposed to look bad!? That's the worst idea I've ever heard. At least I TRIED in my joke mods. Look, no one on these forums will think a crappy (no pun intended) mod is funny. What'll happen is everyone will dislike you and never play any of your mods.

says the guy making "Bad mod" ????

 

 

I'm trying to help you not look like a complete idiot.

That was quite the rude jab.

It has over 4 endings planned, has custom tilesets, sprites and backrounds

Er, random question, but where are those custom tilesets/sprites/backgrounds? The screenshots you took contain none of those, just saying.

 

Er, random question, but where are those custom tilesets/sprites/backgrounds? The screenshots you took contain none of those, just saying.

This is why you finish a demo for a mod BEFORE posting a thread about it.

 

http://www.cavestory.org/forums/threads/modding-section-rules-updated.731/
"1) In order to make a thread for your mod, it must contain either a link to a demo or at least two screenshots showing what has been changed."
I'd close my case here but I got one more thing to say:
Stop jabbing, it's making you an idiot, you clearly have no idea what it means to actually critique something. Heck, I don't, but if you think people are going to remember Epic as "That guy who made poop-story" Think of how others will look at you now as: "That asshole who has little to no criticizing merit."

 

"Why? Why would you ever make a mod that's supposed to look bad!? That's the worst idea I've ever heard....."

"That's the worst idea I'VE ever heard"
You're putting personal opinion, that's not critiquing.

 

Yes what I am doing is consider jabbing, but I'm doing it because you're basically shooting Epic's mod into the dirt, give it a chance to fly in the skies a little.