DEMO: Maze Story

Jun 5, 2016 at 10:26 PM
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Jun 5, 2016 at 10:58 PM
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Despite this not sounding too great judging from the use of "First Cave" and "Mimiga Village", I decided to give this a go.

Firstly, you didn't put all the files into a single folder before putting it into the .zip file. Please do.

Secondly, it doesn't start in 640 x 480 by default. Please do.

another unchanged intro cutscene
oh boy

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what the fuck am i looking at

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this overflows onto another line

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what does this mean

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if this is just normal first cave after that shitstorm i swear to god

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'_>'

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too much space between "I'll" and "die"

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i don't quite know how i managed to get here
but thank fuck it's over

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seems like kazuma is still stuck in first cave

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why did you leave in a "Ha-ha."

are you trying to be as edgy as possible on purpose

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quality/10

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why did mahin eat the village

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i was honestly mashing through this
stuff is capitalized where it shouldn't be

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why is there already a toaster-shaped hole in the wall
balrog hasn't been introduced yet

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emptiness*
and you're missing punctuation

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what the fuck

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empty like my soul................

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at least my man sandaime is okay

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jack is less okay

time to have tea with sandaime and ponder the future of the modding community

this is the opposite of good
 
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:01 PM
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Is this some sort of cruel joke?
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Jun 5, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Soup Man
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Despite this not sounding too great judging from the use of "First Cave" and "Mimiga Village", I decided to give this a go.

Firstly, you didn't put all the files into a single folder before putting it into the .zip file. Please do.

Secondly, it doesn't start in 640 x 480 by default. Please do.

another unchanged intro cutscene
oh boy

p215544-0-ytp0kqr.png

what the fuck am i looking at

p215544-1-8ma9u72.png

this overflows onto another line

p215544-2-wweni9t.png

what does this mean

p215544-3-nlsxpni.png

p215544-4-cibg1go.png


p215544-5-rij9qm7.png

if this is just normal first cave after that shitstorm i swear to god

p215544-6-cckwkbo.png

'_>'

p215544-7-gfjk45k.png

p215544-8-ahxrorw.jpg


p215544-9-6xd4d7v.png

too much space between "I'll" and "die"

p215544-10-1oi2mfv.png

i don't quite know how i managed to get here
but thank fuck it's over

p215544-11-72s95qd.png

seems like kazuma is still stuck in first cave

p215544-12-ph876mt.png

why did you leave in a "Ha-ha."

are you trying to be as edgy as possible on purpose

p215544-13-1apcmwd.png

quality/10

p215544-14-o1ncfwl.png

why did mahin eat the village

p215544-15-joxipzg.png

i was honestly mashing through this
stuff is capitalized where it shouldn't be

p215544-16-ufbgczs.png

why is there already a toaster-shaped hole in the wall
balrog hasn't been introduced yet

p215544-17-4nw9dm2.png

emptiness*
and you're missing punctuation

p215544-18-1dwxydx.png

what the fuck

p215544-19-mevxl9j.png

empty like my soul................

p215544-20-telouy7.png

at least my man sandaime is okay

p215544-21-ojhuweu.png

jack is less okay

time to have tea with sandaime and ponder the future of the modding community

this is the opposite of good
It's supposed to be a sequel to Cave Story (That explains the Toaster hole) in which an unknown force is destroying the universe. Quote has amnesia. The reason Jack is dead is because the unknown force destroyed parts of his brain. The First Cave is supposed to look like that. More will be explained in the full mod.
 
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:06 PM
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By the term "unknown force", do you actually mean you stopped giving a shit?
 
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:07 PM
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It's supposed to be a sequel to Cave Story (That explains the Toaster hole) in which an unknown force is destroying the universe. Quote has amnesia. The reason Jack is dead is because the unknown force destroyed parts of his brain. The First Cave is supposed to look like that. More will be explained in the full mod.
I don't care how intentionally shitty First Cave is supposed to look. I can guarantee that at least 90% of the people who play this mod will drop it upon witnessing that atrocity of a map.
 
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:10 PM
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I don't care how intentionally shitty First Cave is supposed to look. I can guarantee that at least 90% of the people who play this mod will drop it upon witnessing that atrocity of a map.
Sure. I'll fix it up. Make it more... Playable.
 
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:15 PM
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Looks like Genesis and Oblivion are at it again
 
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:51 PM
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Fixed it.

I made it more playable.

I'm thinking of killing off Toroko.
 
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Jun 6, 2016 at 12:07 AM
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There's no way you managed to fix it over the course of an hour.

The mod is now contained in a folder, but you can surely come up with a better name than "New Folder"

The mod still opens in fullscreen by default, not 640 x 480.

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you can walk out of the mod through this hole

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you also really need to learn how to properly capitalize and use punctuation

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no punctuation

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i don't know what i was expecting

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dick move right there

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he wasn't behind the chain before

brb commiting Sudoku

You need to take a short break from continuing the mod and figure out how to properly design a map. This is just sad to watch.
 
Jun 6, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Soup Man
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There's no way you managed to fix it over the course of an hour.

The mod is now contained in a folder, but you can surely come up with a better name than "New Folder"

The mod still opens in fullscreen by default, not 640 x 480.

p215554-0-ane8ltx.png

you can walk out of the mod through this hole

p215554-1-mlqpbjw.png

p215554-2-6qgxj7h.png

you also really need to learn how to properly capitalize and use punctuation

p215554-3-m8vee0c.png

no punctuation

p215554-4-tbm5n8b.png

p215554-5-fpoanf5.png

i don't know what i was expecting

p215554-6-lc1uxjs.png

dick move right there

p215554-7-ys7z7e1.png

he wasn't behind the chain before

brb commiting Sudoku

You need to take a short break from continuing the mod and figure out how to properly design a map. This is just sad to watch.
I fixed most of those; and also; I can't see the images because Imgur doesn't work on my PC. But I can infer.
Also, there were changes in Mimiga Village.
 
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Jun 6, 2016 at 11:38 PM
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Alright, here are my thoughts as I played:
Here we go:
  1. Vanilla title screen and intro sequence. How original.
  2. Generic start of game with basically a broken-looking "Kazuma on PC" room... the tiling here is really ugly to look at.
  3. No period at the end of "Something isn't right".
  4. Some weird glitchy and ugly looking tiling... fun.
  5. HOLY CRAP HE HUNG HIMSELF I WAS NOT PREPARED. Moving on...
  6. Get the Polar Star.... same Kazuma, same.
  7. The Mimiga Village dialogue is rather dull and too close to vanilla for my taste.

So basically, this is vanilla Cave Story with some edits. Also, how does Kazuma know who Quote is? Because King and Toroko are still alive, which means this must take place before the events of the vanilla Cave Story. Unless this is some weird alternative timeline with timetravelling Kazuma...
 
Jun 6, 2016 at 11:40 PM
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Alright, here are my thoughts as I played:
Here we go:
  1. Vanilla title screen and intro sequence. How original.
  2. Generic start of game with basically a broken-looking "Kazuma on PC" room... the tiling here is really ugly to look at.
  3. No period at the end of "Something isn't right".
  4. Some weird glitchy and ugly looking tiling... fun.
  5. HOLY CRAP HE HUNG HIMSELF I WAS NOT PREPARED. Moving on...
  6. Get the Polar Star.... same Kazuma, same.
  7. The Mimiga Village dialogue is rather dull and too close to vanilla for my taste.

So basically, this is vanilla Cave Story with some edits. Also, how does Kazuma know who Quote is? Because King and Toroko are still alive, which means this must take place before the events of the vanilla Cave Story. Unless this is some weird alternative timeline with timetravelling Kazuma...
Basically; it takes place in a messed up CS timeline where Toroko and King are still alive, and quote saved the island but Curly died.
 
Jun 6, 2016 at 11:59 PM
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Basically; it takes place in a messed up CS timeline where Toroko and King are still alive, and quote saved the island but Curly died.
And how exactly was the player supposed to figure any of that out?
 
Jun 17, 2016 at 5:30 AM
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Is how to play or I not find something?
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