They are kind of big, but hand size varies from style to style. They're an important part of the human body, so sometimes more emphasis is put on them.
DoubleThink said:
The lower part of her torso is also slightly too long, but all up it's pretty good
Yeah I didn't plan out the lower half of her body well :/
cultr1 said:
I would consider that a rough draft.
It needs some editing, but it has made progress toward becoming a good drawing.
I would tweak:
Her legs (but you already said that)
Her nose (I dunno, make it less tippy)
Her posture is weird (less leaning back, perhaps look up somebody holding a shotgun and see how their body is positioned)
And that's all I got right now, but those three things would really advance you forward.
I like the nose. But as I said before, her posture and stuff I kind of messed up. Also she's hold the shotgun in an idle position, so I think that's how she would be holding it.
trickybilly said:
Nice. Her intimidated look and the shotgun are in a funny contrast, I mean in a good way. Legs seem a little short, but hey not everybody has a perfect look, maybe she`s born like that.
Gir, I don't know why I didn't spot this sooner, but her breasts. RAISE THEM FOR CHRIST'S SAKE.
I'm fairly certain women don't have boobs at their belly buttons :3
It happens, when woemen become chronologically advanced.
As an sexagenarian I have witnessed this firsthand of course.
Maybe she dyes her hair so you can't see the grey?
Jokes aside, I think it does look better than the last one, except if you're going to draw the nose that way then it should go lower, it looks like the nostrils may be way up above the cheekbone.