If you want good comedy then learn some subtlety. Don't deliver your material like a brick to the face. Also build up to jokes. Don't just rely on one-off gags. Never overuse fourth wall jokes or they will lose impact. Toilet humour isn't funny. Last of all Adam Sandler movies are an example of everything not to do.
If you're going for a non-asm mod, then you're gonna have to REALLY stretch the tsc commands to their limits. Just remember that the comedy mod isn't just a show, it needs to be just as engaging as a game too. The problem I see here is having good gameplay, an above average story, and witty dialouge/scenes which are the heart of comedy mods.