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#1 21 February 2010 - 04:58 AM

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I don't know if there is a thread like this one, but I'm creating it anyway. Here's a preveiw of my Cave Story Story, named Surface Story.

Quote woke up. He was lying face first in a grassy plain, or what was left of it. Quote looked around slowly. Most of the plain was replaced by a large, no, humungous crater. Quote could see the Balcony, where he fought the Doctor on the Floating Island, before it fell out of the sky, just sticking out of the hole. It's that big, he thought to himself. Quote could barely take in what he was seeing. The whole island, smashed into the ground. Ground. The Surface. He slowly walked over to the edge of the crater. In it he could see a distant cave, way at the bottom, one that led into the island. He began to make his way down to the opening. I hope Curly and the others are OK, he thought with a shiver. On a cliff, just metres below him, he saw a small white rabbit, lying still. He was wearing a blue top that was torn in many places, and there were patches of red on his white fur. He didn't look very good.


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#2 21 February 2010 - 07:28 AM

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On a cliff, just metres below him, he saw a small white rabbit, lying still. He was wearing a blue top that was torn in many places, and there were patches of red on his white fur. He didn't look very good.

Sounds too much like Kanpachi.
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#3 21 February 2010 - 07:29 AM

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As in, how did he get on the ground? Stuff like that?

And, the mimiga is not Kanpachi.
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#4 21 February 2010 - 11:32 AM

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Something similar? Um, this is what we call a "fanfic". Yeah, they've been done before, both as standard fics and mods (hey, it's still a fan story, right?). Also, just nitpicking, but this thread could've been made in the Cave Story subforum.
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#5 22 February 2010 - 03:21 AM

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Oh, I'd have done that if I had known but yeah. Anyways, I'll be posting a link to it on Fanfiction, as soon as my account is old enough to do so. Until then, people who care have something to look forward to.
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#6 22 February 2010 - 03:28 AM

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I like it.

MAKE MORE!!!!

#7 22 February 2010 - 04:54 AM

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Why thank you. I will post regular updates here, such as new chapters and whatnot.
If there are enough requests, I may make another one, folloing on from a different ending, or maybe just write something based round the events of Cave Story. Either way, the story should be up by tommorow.
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#8 22 February 2010 - 04:56 AM

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How many requests do you need?

#9 22 February 2010 - 05:04 AM

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Depends, mainly on what you want me to do.
I'd say around 20 to 30 should be fine, and I'll pick the most wanted one.

I would also be really, really happy if someone who is a better artist than me could make some cover art, but thats not a priority, they may have to red the story first to clarify what they could draw.
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#10 22 February 2010 - 05:23 AM

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Depends, mainly on what you want me to do.
I'd say around 20 to 30 should be fine, and I'll pick the most wanted one.


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