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[Pigaro]

Hi guys.
I know a few of you have been waiting a while for more updates.
Well, my friends and I kind of lost interest, but we've FINALLY got our ideas back.
I have been quite active on my DeviantART account, and my friend's have too- We've scrapped our old story and Jordan is writing us a new story based off of our old storyline.
If you would like to follow updates on J Story, visit my DeviantART account.
If you want a direct item to follow for updates, visit my Journal Entry.
If you would like to contact me, send me a note or comment on DeviantART.

Downloads- Alpha 0.07 (Original Alpha)

Original Post-

Spoiler

This is the first mod I've made being over two maps, so I expect it to go farther than most ideas I've had.
Anyway, it's basically three friends fighting an evil robot. Pretty simple storyline. It has all been thought out and revised, I just haven't had all of the time to mod it all.
I've only been working on this for a week or so. This is also a group project- the main characters being the people I'm working on it with.
Anyway, there are many, many bugs. If any are found please bring them to my attention so I can fix them as soon as possible.

Version Alpha 0.07- Mediafire
-Bugs
-Much of the music will not return to same volume/ skips from one song to the next
-Sprites jump in the first room


Credits
Me- Maps, Scripts, Story, A few Custom Sprites
Joe- Maps, Story, All Custom Sprites
Jordan- Scripts, Story
Pixel- Original Cave Story, all that Jazz
Wistil- Maker of Cave Editor


If you honestly care, here's a button-

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Thank you Joe for being awesome.

Edited by Pigaro, 11 September 2012 - 09:23 PM.

[hate9]

Looks fun!
I'll rate it using haydenstudios' rating system when I've played it.
EDIT: WOW! an actually good mod! What an IDEA!
Good job on it though, seriously.
Is this your first mod?

Edited by hate9, 19 June 2012 - 05:25 PM.

[Pigaro]

Looks fun!
I'll rate it using haydenstudios' rating system when I've played it.
EDIT: WOW! an actually good mod! What an IDEA!
Good job on it though, seriously.
Is this your first mod?

Thanks, my friends and I thought it up a couple of weeks ago.
Technically, it is my first 'real' mod, but I have tried to mod Cave Story quite a bit in the past.
Thank you for the constructive critism and bugs not noted yet would be greatly appreciated

[Moon]

New people making good mods?
-does a reality check-

Okay I'm actually not dreaming.

[Noxid]

New people making good mods?
-does a reality check-

Okay I'm actually not dreaming.

Pigaro joined before you did bro

[hate9]

You're welcome Pigaro, although, I did forget to use haydenstudios' rating system, so I'll do that now:

Spoiler

Storyline: 5/10 Mediocre.
Well, I can't exactly call it original, you are in cave story, but you have your friends added too,
and you did it well.

Dialog: 5/10 Mediocre.
It was okay, nuf said.

Level Design: 5/10 Mediocre.
I know I'm starting to sound repetitive, but 5/10 is the most apropriate rating I can find, that and you only edited 2 levels.

Gameplay: 5/10 Mediocre.
It was fun, for what I played of it, but there wasn't much of it. (duh, it's a first demo, and I honestly can't really criticize anyone else's mod short of unplayable, I mean, have you seen MY first demo?
Hopefully not, don't download it, if you want to see my mod at all, download the latest demo, 0.0.0.1 is the worst mod demo in existence.)

Custom Graphics: 7/10 Good.
Nice job, did you make them yourself?

Glitches:
I know you said there were some but I honestly can't find any, including the ones you mentioned.

Improvements: Uhh, more gameplay? that's about it and this is the first demo, so good job.

Overall Score: 7/10 Mediocre.
This is the first good mod I have seen in a long time.

And if I did this wrong, haydenstudios is welcome to re-rate this.

[Pigaro]

You're welcome Pigaro, although, I did forget to use haydenstudios' rating system, so I'll do that now:

Spoiler

Storyline: 5/10 Mediocre.
Well, I can't exactly call it original, you are in cave story, but you have your friends added too,
and you did it well.

Dialog: 5/10 Mediocre.
It was okay, nuf said.

Level Design: 5/10 Mediocre.
I know I'm starting to sound repetitive, but 5/10 is the most apropriate rating I can find, that and you only edited 2 levels.

Gameplay: 5/10 Mediocre.
It was fun, for what I played of it, but there wasn't much of it. (duh, it's a first demo, and I honestly can't really criticize anyone else's mod short of unplayable, I mean, have you seen MY first demo?
Hopefully not, don't download it, if you want to see my mod at all, download the latest demo, 0.0.0.1 is the worst mod demo in existence.)

Custom Graphics: 7/10 Good.
Nice job, did you make them yourself?

Glitches:
I know you said there were some but I honestly can't find any, including the ones you mentioned.

Improvements: Uhh, more gameplay? that's about it and this is the first demo, so good job.

Overall Score: 7/10 Mediocre.
This is the first good mod I have seen in a long time.

And if I did this wrong, haydenstudios is welcome to re-rate this.

Ha, thanks. Yeah, I thought it wouldn't be to spectacular for a first demo. Anyway, I will put this into consideration and work it into the next demo.

[Tpcool]

Oh man Piggy you can like totally count on me to check yo mod out.

That was a really interesting mod! To begin with the issues, the weapon descriptions seem out of place (since they are the original descriptions). Also, in the First Cave, if you go to the right, you sort of go through the wall... Um, anyways, the character art was really great and the dialogue was top-notch (and I don't even know who these people are!). The levels themselves I will not judge right now due to how short the mod is, but for now it seems on par. Best of luck to you.

[Pigaro]

-MAJOR UPDATE-
J Story has begun again, visit the OP or my DeviantART page for updates!

[fadoink]

I want to try it but I'm on my dad's com.