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[DualHack]

Hey guys whats up Im making a mod, Called Matt Story! The game is based on my dreams and real life.

Version 0.1

Edit:computer hates RaVersion 0.1 Zip if your r

Version 0.2

Verison 0.3

Version 0.7 (it ends after the teacher lounge secne)
Any ways since Magic Doors Requested this He'll get it, the story is about me and my town. but the main thing is my school. Since i have a horrible princeabal i have to set things right. Have fun!

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Version 0.6: This is the best update yet! gltiched fixed, FAI FAO added, and a new map!(exteremly hard thought)

Edited by DualHack, 18 February 2012 - 07:24 PM.

[CommanderJersey]

So... your name is Matt?

[DualHack]

So... your name is Matt?

Well do you think my name is Matt if the game is called Matt Story?

[Cave Story]

When I first saw this thread, I thought it was Mutt Story. Good for laugh. I don't have time now to play your mod, but I will later.

[CommanderJersey]

I would play it, but my computer hates .rars
Sorry

[HaydenStudios]

Let's see here:

Spoiler

Storyline: 3/10 Poor. I guess it's not necessarily fair to say so far how good the storyline is with how early of a release this is, but it doesn't look too promising. But if you impress me as it progresses, then this score may very well miprove.

Dialog: 4/10 Bad. Sorry, but just having a note making sure you're okay? Doesn't do much for me. Maybe it's just for how early on this is in the mod, so this score might improve as the mod progresses.

Level Design: 3/10 Poor. This thing could really do with some more paths, and grass to make the terrain seem more natural. I wanted to give this category another point, but that opening at the bottom left brings it down a point. See glitch #5 for details.

Gameplay: 5/10 Mediocre. Like all mods, the redeeming property of this game is that it uses the game engine from Cave Story, so it's kinda hard to screw up the jumping physics and such. But the rest of this mod brings it down.

Glitches:
1) Instead of a little scene upon runnnig the game, I am asked if I want to save my game before going to the main menu.
2) "You got the Micheane Gun," Machine gun is misspelled.
3) The word "right" continues from one line in the message box to the next. And generally, you didn't use much capitalization and proper punctuation in what little dialog we get. You might wanna proofread this mod.
4) When I go to the door at the bottom right corner of the room, it fades out, but it fades back in to my position without changing rooms, then runs the message box for getting the machine gun and the note, but this time I can move around while it's happening.
5) At the bottom left corner of the room, there's an empty space, and if I walk through it, I fall off the edge of the map.

Improvements:
1) Fix all of the glitches mentioned above.
2) Improve the level design.
3) Proofread all of the message boxes.

Overall Score: 3/10 Poor. Sorry, but the level design is really not a lot to talk about, there is a whopping five glitches packed into one room, the message boxes have poor grammar, and I can't even progress through the game.

Edited by HaydenStudios, 03 February 2012 - 01:26 AM.

[DualHack]

Let's see here:

Spoiler

Storyline: 3/10 Poor. I guess it's not necessarily fair to say so far how good the storyline is with how early of a release this is, but it doesn't look too primising. But if you impress me as it progresses, then this score may very well miprove.

Dialog: 4/10 Bad. Sorry, but just having a note making sure you'er okay? Doesn't do much for me. Maybe it's just for how early on this is in the mod, so this score might improve as the mod progresses.

Level Design: 3/10 Poor. This thing could really do with some more paths, and grass to make the terrain seem more natural. I wanted to give this category another point, but that opening at the bottom left brings it down a point. See glitches for details.
Gameplay: 5/10 Mediocre. Like all mods, the redeeming property of this game is that it uses the game engine from Cave Story, so it's kinda hard to screw up the jumping physics and such.
Glitches:
1) Instead of a little scene before the main menu, I am asked if I want to save my game before going to the main menu.
2) "You got the Micheane Gun," Machine gun is misspelled.
3) For the word "right" continues from one line in the message box to the next. And generally, you didn't use much capitalization and proper punctuation in what little dialog we get. You might wanna proof read it.
4) When I go to the door at the bottom right corner of the room, it fades out, but it fades back in to my position, then runs the message box for getting the machine gun and the note, but this time I can move around while it's happening.
5) At the bottom right corner of the room, there's an empty space, and if I walk through it, I fall off the edge of the map.
Improvements: 1) Fix all of the glitches mentioned above.
2) Improve the level design.
3) Proofread all of the message boxes.

Overall Score: 3/10 Poor. Sorry, but the level design is really not a lot to talk about, there is a whopping five glitches packed into one room, the message boxes have poor grammar, and I can't even progress through the game.

For 2nd Glitch is sopossed to splet like that, (Meach-ea-nea).

For 1st Glitch sry i did that an propose.

for 4th glitch i did that beacuse its the end of the Demo

for 5th glitch Oops

for Overall Score: yeah its ok

[HaydenStudios]

For 2nd Glitch is sopossed to splet like that, (Meach-ea-nea).

If you're not trying to spell it how it is spelled in Cave Story, and you're not trying to spell the word, "Machine," then, ok......

For 1st Glitch sry i did that an propose.

You did that on purpose? If so, then why are you apologizing?

for 4th glitch i did that beacuse its the end of the Demo

I don't think that was entirely on purpose. You see, it runs the script for getting the machine gun when you get to it, instead of just fading out.
Oh, I just looked at your code, and realized something. For some of the events in your script, you typed "#203" instead of "#0203". Reagardless of what number it is, the event number has to have four digits, or else your script probably won't work properly.

Edited by HaydenStudios, 03 February 2012 - 01:45 AM.

[DualHack]

New demo in Frist post

[CommanderJersey]

1. At bottom of 2nd map at left, you can fall off of the level.
2. At second map door, you can just use a door entitie so the top isn't rocky.
3. Custom sprites are ok, but I fell like I've seen that character before... hmm...
4. You might want to try using different types of tiles.